I plan to post my epic fic here soon, and this thread will serve for any feedback/comments/suggestions/etc readers may have for the story as it progresses. I don’t mind concrit at all, so even if there’s something that didn’t work for you or confused you, I’m up for hearing about it.
I created this thread rather than wishing people to post on the individual chapter posts so that the story chapters aren’t being bumped by comments and therefore, thrown out of order.
I am Thunderatigress, a new member of TCL. First of all, I would like to congratulate you on the epic tale of "Signal in the Sky" that you have been writing. I 've red all its chapters so far. It was breathtaking all through the way! I have many times expressed my admiration about it to my friends as well.
However, Liono's death was something I still can't come to terms with. I was very disappointed at first of the way the story had evolved. It crushed my childhood ideals of the Thundercats being invincible and always there fighting against evil. Of course I realise that in a mature Thundercats story everything is possible, as in real life and so is death.
The story you wrote seemed to me so matching to the Thundercats characters and concept that i grew to consider it as the natural outcome of the Thundercats episodes I have been watching as a child. However, Lion-o's death put an end to my favourite Thundercats team's adventures as I had known them. Could you restore Lion-o back to his family and friends alive? I would really love such an option.
Thank you and your partners in writing SITS, for the great story you have written so far. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter of "Signal In The Sky". I am sure that it will be great as well.
Yours sincerely
Thunderatigress
Sorry to have missed this comment until now - I have been swallowed up by mundania and haven’t been on my regular message board rounds in some time :eek:
Thank you for taking the time to read and leave comments. I really appreciate the feedback.
I also understand the feelings regarding the plot choice of killing off a main character. It’s a very risky move, and I do know it’s not been a popular one. For me, part of the fun of fic is to explore things the canon never would (and maybe for good reason!); to explore the really big or risky ‘what ifs’
I keep the story most up-to-date at my site’s fic archive so I hope you stick with it a little longer. The plot has been sorted out for a long time, and I don’t want to say at this point what the plans for Lion-O are for the sake of anyone still reading. All I will say at this point is nobody is ever truly dead in the Tcats universe (ex: Jaga - and surely just because Lion-O is dead in the flesh in the story he has not been absent from the story at all) and it’s a magical universe at that. Anything truly is possible!
Thanks again for reading and sharing your thoughts.