My TC Fanfic

I love writing fan fics and thought I’d give TC a try. I wrote three scenes. I am not that good of a writer like you guys are so please bare with me. Three scenes isn’t a lot but I would like to get your opinions. I should probably write the whole episode first. Please comment on what you think so far. It is in script format.


[SIZE=2]Scene 1[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Many moons away there is a planet called Plun-Darr. The blue sky has become a dirty orange color. The oceans have become nothing but a sea of flames. Trees and flowers is nothing but a long ago memory.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe, the king of the lizards, looks up in the sky as a shadow of darkness cover him like a big blanket. The sky has been taken over by vultures.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe: (To himself) That is not a good sign.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe’s second in command Zaza runs towards him and is yelling as he gets closer. Zaza losses control and if it wasn’t for a small rock in the way that knocked him off his feet he would have crashed into Slithe.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Zaza: You won’t believe it Slithe…You won’t believe it…[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Slithe: Talk you fool.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Zaza: The jackals…the jackals…they are leaving.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Slithe: They are?[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe looks up again.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe: The vultures are leaving as well.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Zaza: There is nothing left on Plun-Darr. The war against the vultures and jackals have destroyed this planet. We will have to leave as well.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Slithe: I am not abandoning Plun-Darr. With the flying monkeys and the brainless jackals gone…I will rule Plun-Darr.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Zaza: There is nothing left to rule.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe smacks Zaza. Suddenly the earth starts to shake and crack. Flames are escaping from the cracks in the earth.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe: Seem like you do have a brain cell after all. Get the ships ready. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Zaza: Where will we go Slithe?[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe looks up at the sky again. Far away is another planet Thundera. Slithe gets an evil grin on his green face.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Slithe: Why are you still here Zaza?[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Zaza nods and runs away. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Scene 2[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Lion-O looks at a big wall that is outside of Cat’s Castle. Lion-O gets a flashback of when he was just a young cub.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Voice Over (Jaga): A hundred Thunderian years ago there was a King. He was the lord of the Thundercats but power darkened his heart. He enslaved his own people.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]The scene cuts to a young Lion-O looking at the wall inquisitively.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Lion-O: What happened to him Jaga?[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Jaga: That is a story for when you are much older my dear Lion-O.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Lion-O: Jaga I am not a cub anymore. I am old enough.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Jaga starts to laugh.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Jaga: Sure you are.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Lion-O’s flashback ends. He looks down at Snarf who is licking his paw.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Lion-O: You know Snarf. Jaga never told me the rest of the story.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Snarf: Snarf Snarf.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Jaga comes out of the castle. He sees Lion-O standing in front of the wall. He walks up to him.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Jaga: Prince Lion-O.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Lion-O: You never told me the rest of the story Jaga.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Jaga: Didn’t I.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Lion-O: No you said I was too young. I am not anymore.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Jaga: No you are not. You want to hear the rest of the story.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Lion-O: Yes Jaga. I want to know what happened to this cruel King.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Jaga: Then I shall tell you my young Prince.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Jaga turns around and walks to the fountain and sits on the edge. Lion-O follows and sits in front of Jaga.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Scene 3[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Wilykat and Wilykit are standing behind a tree. They are looking at Cat’s Castle.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Wilykit: It is much bigger than I thought it would be Kat.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykat: It is.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykit: How are we going to get in? It must be guarded.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykat: If there is a way we will find it Kit.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykit: It must be beautiful inside. Everything must be made of gold.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykat: Floors of gold…[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykit: Windows of gold…[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykat: Beds of gold…[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Wilykit: And lots of food.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Kit sees the food floatiing around her head. he floating food disspareas when Kat’s stomach makes a growling sound. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Kat and Kit runs towards the castle.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Kit: Suddenly I don’t think it is such a good idea. If they catch us we would go to the dungeons. I am too young to go to the dungeons.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Kat: We just have to be smart. Besides we need to see him. He will be the only one that could help us.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Kit: What if he can’t?[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Kat: I saw him before Kit. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Kat’s sees an image of Tygra in his mind.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Kat: We came a long way. We can’t leave until we see him.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Kit gives a sigh.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2]Kit: Time to think of a plan to get in.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=2]Kat: I think I may have one. Come on Kit.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2] [FONT=Verdana]Kat and Kit runs towards the castle’s gate.[/FONT][/SIZE]

Excellent work here!